The bar chart below illustrates the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States.

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The data of the use of tobacco products by secondary school students in the United States are described in the bar chart. The x- axis presents the type of tobacco products consist of Any Use, Cigarettes, Cigars, Smokeless, Pipes, Bidis and Kreteks, while y- axis shows the percentage of students.

To begin with, in the Middle school, the type of Any Use is the most considerable percentage ( 12.5 % ) , which is comparable as roughly three quarters of Cigarettes and two times of Cigars. Furthermore, the Pipes and Bidis are slightly more than Smokeless, which is similar to Kreteks, thus both of these types are the lowest percentage.

The Any Use type also stand as the highest percentage (35 % ) in High school, followed by Cigarettes which is almost a hundred of Cigars ( 15 % ) . In addition, Smokeless type is more than 50 % of Pipes ( well over 2.5 % ) , which is slightly less than Bidis and Kreteks ( 5 % ) , making it as the lowest percentage.

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The x- axis presents the type of tobacco products consist of Any Use
The x- axis presents the type of tobacco products consisting of Any Use

the type of Any Use is the most considerable percentage
the type of Any Use is in the most considerable percentage
the type of Any Use has the most considerable percentage

both of these types are the lowest percentage.
both of these types are in the lowest percentage.

The Any Use type also stand as the highest percentage
The Any Use type also stands as the highest percentage

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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 159 200
No. of Characters: 735 1000
No. of Different Words: 83 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.551 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.623 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.534 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.253 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.536 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.747 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4

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