The bar shows numbers of marriages and divorces and marital status in 30 years from 1970 in America.
The bar shows numbers of marriages and divorces and marital status in 30 years from 1970 in America.The shown bar overlooked condition in America between 1970 and 2000.
It is clear as seen marriages number in 1970 only 2.5 million and decreased by 500 thousand peoples in 2000. “Married Status” rates as the highest marital status between 1970 and 2000.the lowest trends gained by widowed around 3 million in 1970, this condition slightly increased to 500 thousand in 2000.
Divorces rate between 1970 and 2000 remain constant, although in 1980 reached peak to 1.4 million. In percentage divorces rates increase by 8% in just 30 years.
Married status rates decrease in last 10 years, but constant in first 10 years in 2.5 million people. Therefore, married rates decrease and never married status increase around 5% between 1970 and 2000. “Married” rate status as the highest rates throughout the numbers of marital status in 30 years.
marriages number in 1970 only 2.5 million
marriages number in 1970 was only 2.5 million
“Married Status” rates as the highest marital status between 1970 and 2000.
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Divorces rate between 1970 and 2000 remain constant,
Divorces rate between 1970 and 2000 remains constant,
Divorces rate between 1970 and 2000 remained constant,
Married status rates decrease in last 10 years, but constant in first 10 years in 2.5 million people.
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Sentence: It is clear as seen marriages number in 1970 only 2.5 million and decreased by 500 thousand peoples in 2000.
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