The bar chart describes the comparison of six consumer goods in four European Countries (Britain, France, Italy, and Germany) by the amount of money they spent. It can be obviously seen that photographic film is the most popular goods among the other goods such as toys, CDs, perfumes, tennis racquets, and personal stereos.
In Germany, people tend to spend their money in tennis racquets rather than other goods. They spend around 150,000 pounds sterling. In contrast, people in France spend the least money to buy tennis racquets. In personal stereos equipment, people in France and German show same amount of money they spent on it, it is almost 148.000 pounds sterling. People in Italy show interest in Toys, they spend about 158,000 pounds sterling to buy toys. The amount of money that Italian spent on toys is exactly same with people in France.
Overall, Britain is the most consumptive county among the others. It is around 173,000 pounds sterling on photographic film, 168,000 on toys, almost 165,000 on CDs, 160,000 on perfumes, and 154,000 on tennis racquets and stereos.
money in tennis racquets rather than other goods.
money in tennis racquets rather than money in other goods.
people in France and German show same amount of money
people in France and German show the same amount of money
is exactly same with people in France.
is exactly the same as people in France.
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