Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours Use specific reasons and examples to support

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Life has many beautiful and enjoyable things to do and to relish in addition to work. Some workers prefer to have a part-time job for only three days per week, others need to work five days a week. However, unfortunately, it is not optional for many people. For me, I choose to work only three days per week for long hours a day rather than working the whole week for shorter hours and in this essay I will discuss my reasons for that support.

First of all, the part-time job enhanced the relations with my family members. It allowed me to spend much time with my family, friends and my kids as well. I only work three days a week for 10 hours per day, this helps me to enjoy the other four days doing activities with my kids and visiting my parents as well as getting out with my husband to a movie theatre or a restaurant. On the other hand, the people who work five days have only two days in the weekend to do all the activities they love. I'm sure that their relation with their family is not going well.

Secondly, we have to take care of our health as it is the most precious thing we have. If we go to work every day, we will be always exhausted and tired. When we have much free time, we can do exercises, go to the park for a walk in the morning or even just sit on the couch doing nothing. All these activities will relieve the stress that has occupied us due to the work. From my personal experience, during the holidays, I wake up at 9 a.m and eat my breakfast slowly, savoring each bite of it then I go for a walk and to do some exercises. I find the time to talk with my husband and play with my kids. My inner peace has increased and that was reflected on my health as well.

Lastly, in my free time, I'm able to take courses or read books related to my career to potentiate it and elevate my level of knowledge. Since I have started my part-time job, I could finish three courses in my field which for sure had a positive effect on my performance at work.

In the summary, life is short and we need to make the best use of every minute we have in doing things we love and spending the most part of it with our beloved ones. This will improve our health and indirectly, enhance our career as well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, well, in addition, as well as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15046296296 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21915176573 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5171742478 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.65 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301559551594 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100973929151 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113753959574 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188016444992 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155410387117 0.0645574589148 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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