The chart illustrates about US honey – bee colonies amount of population, how much that it Produces honey number of tonne from 1970 – 2010 years.
In 1970 US Honey – Bee Colonies the percentage of population 4 million, in 1980 the population increased of percentage 4,5 million. However, some decades gradual decline population from 1990 until 2010¸ that comes down about 10 years it produces the same years 1980 almost 110 tonnes.
the most of produce honey in 1970, by amount of population honey bee 4 million, the reach highest production 130.000 tonnes, with volume of population a fewer than it produce many honey. On the contrary, during the same period In 1980 the percentage of population 4 million more but it decline to produce honey just 110 tonnes.
While three decades from 1980 to 2000 number of population fluctuation between 100 – 120 tonne, the three period it caused decrease volume of production. To hit the lowest in 2010.
Overall, amount of population have declined but it increase number of to produce honey during thirty years.
Sentence: the most of produce honey in 1970, by amount of population honey bee 4 million, the reach highest production 130.000 tonnes, with volume of population a fewer than it produce many honey.
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Sentence: On the contrary, during the same period In 1980 the percentage of population 4 million more but it decline to produce honey just 110 tonnes.
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Sentence: Overall, amount of population have declined but it increase number of to produce honey during thirty years.
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