the graph and table below give the information about the water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the info by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison wherever relevant.
The graph illustrates the global water use for agricultural, industrial and domestic purpose in cubic kilometers (km3) in the twentieth century. The table gives information about the population, area and water consumption in Brazil and Congo during 2000. In the graph it can be clearly seen that maximum amount of water was used for agriculture whereas minimum was used for domestic purpose.
At the dawn of 20th century (1900) the amount of water used for domestic and industrial purpose was almost same (about 20 to 50km3) which gradually increased till the first half of the century (1950) and w...
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