The Table shows the precentage of journeys mad by different forms of transports in four countries.
The bar graphs show the results of a survey into car use.
The table compares about the various transportation which is used by people
in Canada, Belgium, Germany, and Netherland. In the use of car, Canada has the highest rank which have 90 percent of its people use car. Belgium still has significant number of its people who use car which are 72 percent. The less two countries also have same high trend which Germany has 68 percent and Netherland 47 percent. Bicycle still has a place as the second favorite as people used, especcially in Netherland which spent 47 percent of its people who use transportation. The Other three has spent just under 3 percent of its people. In addition, People in four countries still choose the non privat transportation eventhough the amount is not as big as the old two, because those are just between 3 until 18 percent. Morover between 5 until 18 percent People in those four countries still take a walk to reach their destination. The least they use other transportation which the amount in avarage is not more than 3 percent,
The reason why Canada is the place as the highest rank of people car used, based on the bar graph about the motivation of people, no alternative of transportation that able to use by drivers, is the biggest reason which is voted by almost 40 respondens. In addition, 30 respondens believe that the necessity for work as the reason why they chose the car and make it as The second biggest motivation. People who want to get convenient preferably using car than other transportation. The last two reasons because using car is quicker, 20 responden admit it and Working nightshift made people choose car to get more secure.
Afterall, we can conclude that the table and the bar chart are in accordance to one an another that show the tendency of using car in Canada, why highest, is because there are no alternative that people can use beside car to reach their destination.
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Sentence: Bicycle still has a place as the second favorite as people used, especcially in Netherland which spent 47 percent of its people who use transportation.
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Sentence: The reason why Canada is the place as the highest rank of people car used, based on the bar graph about the motivation of people, no alternative of transportation that able to use by drivers, is the biggest reason which is voted by almost 40 respondens.
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Sentence: In addition, 30 respondens believe that the necessity for work as the reason why they chose the car and make it as The second biggest motivation.
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Sentence: The last two reasons because using car is quicker, 20 responden admit it and Working nightshift made people choose car to get more secure.
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