Amount spent on consumer goods
The chart illustrated the comparison of shopper’s money spending in four countries in Europe. Moreover, the measurement of money spending was divided into 6 products, i.e. individual radio, tennis racquets, cologne, movies equipment, plaything, as well as camera video.
It is clear that Britain is the most money spender for all products. Camera video is the most favourite product in this region, which spent more than 160.000 pounds sterling. Similarly, France also spent lot of money for camera, but it lower than
Britain.
Even though France is the lower than Britain, albeit photographic film also is the favourable product that every society may have.
In contrast, Italy which the second highest amount spender were more allocate their money for purchasing plaything then photographic arts. However, the amount of money that Italian citizens spent for toys not as big as then Britain’s toys consume which reached around 165 pounds sterling.
In addition, each regions have the highest product consumption which is different with others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of money for camera, but it lower than Britain. Even though France is the lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, similarly, so, then, well, in addition, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57055214724 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69776861722 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3233318329 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 5.23603664747 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121267450797 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478076355828 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668591510882 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053694931437 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734720076206 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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