Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular? do the advantages in this way outweight its disadvantages.
In the global era, there are many e-commerce companies have been developing in numerous countries in the world. One important aspect of e-commerce companies is utilizing the internet for exchanging market place from conventional to virtual. In my view, there are many advantages which was made by the internet transactions than conventional. I hold this view for several reasons which are set out below.
First, I would like to argue that internet market is successful to create the new model of market and transaction which it easily, visible, as well as efficient. By utilizing the internet apps, all of people could buying the number of products without going to the market store, and they just wait it in their offices or their homes.
On the other hand, referring to the data from Digital Communication Studies University of Melbourne stated that the benefit of internet market for seller are they could efficiency their monthly expenses such as shop rental fees, electricity, as well as building tax which in the past they should pay all of them. Today, by utilizing the internet they could promoting and selling their products from their houses by massively.
In term of disadvantage, even though some people believe that the internet market tend to have high risk for the transaction due to it has stimulate the escalation of sales fraud, albeit there is little evidence to support this perspective.
Taking everything into consideration, I believe that the internet market has successful to preserve plenty positive impact for seller and costumer, especially the convenience, visibility, and efficiency.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'buy'
Suggestion: buy
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...r seller are they could efficiency their monthly expenses such as shop rental fee...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'promote'
Suggestion: promote
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Message: Use past participle here: 'stimulated'.
Suggestion: stimulated
... risk for the transaction due to it has stimulate the escalation of sales fraud, albeit t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28957528958 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84022435307 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3070122779 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811468576276 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350869009272 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175805300668 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449486420268 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114156747555 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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