Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular? do the advantages in this way outweight its disadvantages.
Online shopping is a form of electronic commerce which allows consumers to directly buy goods or services from a seller over the Internet using a Web browser. one of the most controversial issue today relates that is the online shopping has pros or cons? In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both point of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that the benefits of considerably outweight its disadvantages the first and the most important advantage is time saving. Every person has busy schedule in their life. So they have not enough time to go to market and do shopping. they do online shopping by sitting at their homes. Likewise, there are number of varieties are available on shopping sites as compair to shops. In addition, there is large discount available on online shopping sites, as well as their are number of options like free delivery option, cash on delivery payment and money guarantee . For instance, the number of shopping sites like amazon, e-bay.In these popular and international sites security is also available and return option in some cases.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that infant it has all disadvantages. The first disadvantage of online shopping is fraud and scamm.Fraud and scammer are all around all life aspects. They cheat the peoples. For instance, we daily hear about the news of fraud. Few months ago, I also hear about the news that a person purchase a laptop from a shopping site but the box was full of newspapers. The second disadvantage is that we cannot know about the quality and material of products.
In conclusion, it is evident that the online shopping has pros outweight than cons. So they suggestion is that purchase things after getting proper knowledge about shipping sites and make sure that they are certified or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83800623053 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59519019579 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1852012107 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7368421053 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076761881229 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226644266475 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272050659551 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461036091713 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216489230861 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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