Visual pollution is the major case of accidents on roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree
Visual pollution is an aesthetic issue and refers to impact of pollution that impair once ability to enjoy a visita or view. In the current time of technological advancement one of the most pressing concerns is major case of accidents on roads? I completely agree with this statement and shall explore the same from various
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The first step is to understand why this is happening. Broadly speaking there are the main reason is the hanging of billboards on the side of the roads furthermore the billboards are hanging to give the advertisement related to new products, about sals etc.the billboards have attracted the concentration of drivers and which make case of a big accident. For instance, there is a big example of US that in US there was 48 cars damage because one can driver attract towards the billboard and he had been slow down the speed of car and next 48 cars was also damaged. So billboards are major case of accidents on roads.
Further, emphasising my point of view traffic is also a major case of accidents because every person has his own vehic.The intensified road, the construction of narrow roads and bad conditions of roads has a great role on accidents. For instance there was a survey held by turbune on last year, the most of the people claim to the conditions of roads for accidents.so it has been assumed that it is also a prominent reason for accidents.
In conclusion, it can be asserted that it is a debateable issue outhough , l believe that government have to implement some lows regarding the visual pollution same as US.In US hanging of billboards banned on roads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, broadly speaking, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78136200717 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8090233614 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4431243092 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168496182475 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834680844085 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931020759084 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10682099242 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577059207161 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.