In some countries younger people are loosing their interest in teaching profession? Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation.

Essay topics: In some countries younger people are loosing their interest in teaching profession? Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation.

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Teacher is a person who helps others to acquire knowledge, competences or values. one of the most pressing concerns regarding the topic is that why younger people have no interest in teaching profession? in this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the proactive measures that individual could implement to reduce the problem.
The first step is understand why is this happening? broadly speaking, there isthe first main reason is that the large burden on the teachers like they are teaching in the school but they have also burden of copy checking, paper checking at there home. They have no longer time to spend with their family members. There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. however, one option that school authorities has to managed their schedule in this way that they have some time to finish their school work on the school work on the school and cannot take along with home. By doing this they have much to spend their time with family and friends.
One of the cause of this could be that small numbers of salaries are given by government and school authorities. While more of the time teacher spend on school. So their salaries are very small as compared to their work. For instance, there are large number of strikes held by school teachers. The solution is that government should to increase the salaries of teachers. By doing this, younger people will increasing their intrest in teaching profession.
As we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. I tend to believe that by doing some efforts from government, authorities and individuals the intrest of younger people would be increased in teaching profession.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, regarding, so, while, as to, broadly speaking, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89527027027 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4648714401 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489864864865 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3615290852 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2352941176 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234356887631 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080367723455 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761059983517 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156741367856 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302806817427 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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