Annual music sales in Britain
The pie chart presents us the annual music sales in Britain. Same as was it was before and now the music industry is rising very up, and it has very much appailing to youngsters. Mostly age of adolescent, elder a bit really like to listen when feeling bored, sad or going through difficulties across different path of life.Below we will discuss it explicitly.
On the pie chart, we see its separated into 4 categories. Each of them has labelled with different names of types of music. The areas of music that young ages like listening are: rock, jazz, classical and, others.
Accoriding to the pie chart, mostly listened by folks is rock possessing of 56%, which is the highest number between all of the others. However, other has been likeable by merely 9%. Next to rock is coming down to classical of 21% percent.Lesser of chart among mostly have heard is JAZZ having of 14%.
Overall, the music sales in britain at annual, the holder of the music throne is rock, considered the first of others. Others types of music was wishful listened by people are classical, jazz, and other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74736842105 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51003526037 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6612753912 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299228248987 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129634229383 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202697791023 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195927067606 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161062925004 0.0819641961636 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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