Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, picture, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Creative artists should always, but not too much extent to be given freedom. They can express ideas through different media's, such as, television, music,art, movies, compositions, anthology, and different different other communication media’s.
When a person has bright, briskness ideas, it could lead to innovative steps of developing world of occurring day by day forward. Without any restriction of artists,which it can brought to great afterwards results,which has essential effect to human kind, sociology. The works of artists can give us various entertainments, puppeteer different characters of figures they actuate on hands which, therefore people will have emotional satisfaction,mind calmness and peacefulness. After hours in a day of work people are tiring,frustrating of repetition of same route of jobs.So this can soothe people’s mind, enjoy their time. Artists have major efficiency to this life of their contributed workforce, adherence of their thoughts that put into action, without have any government restriction they may change the daily life of people.
However, if artists have fully freedom, have on hands a liberty which could ecxeed the level of which they cannot produce more than of which government rules imposed on them,that considered trespass laws. That’s what make sad, the artists think they have a fully freedom, that they can abuse society. Therefore, which it heir to other youngesters,new generation coming after now,to new heirs of our time.They will affected of so call transgression of law after what, the youngsters can think they can do what they want,do to people which considered not normal to our nowadays, diminishing of honors that violates traditional ethics of arts.
In conlusion, there are pros and cons of liberty given to artists to make their creative thoughts in action.Governments should give freedom to artists because they do great jobs of flourishing cultures, stabilizing, stylizing the people views of life.But, there are bad misconceptions of how people think about freedom which had seen of artists introduces to them.Let it be the freedom of artists thoughts and diversification of their lifestyle, but without far long extension contradicting the law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59705882353 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2329657397 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.433426844 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.0 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9090909091 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26840840628 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103797500149 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779527222645 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170377029171 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470603311488 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.