Bar chart

Essay topics:

Bar chart

The given bar chart gives the general information about the total global population presented under proportion unit among 4 countries including India, China, USA and Japan.
Overall, during 52-year period of time, from 1950 to 2002, the number of Chinese residents claimed the highest rank based on the statistics above, meanwhile, Indian population is potentially predicted to reach the peak, higher than the rest of mentioned nations.
In India, over 150 years, counted from 1950 to 2050, there was a steady growth in the national population. In the nineteenth century, the dwellings in this country were recorded at more than 10 percent, which came second only to China. Up to 2050, the number of people is predictably estimated about 18 percent.
Coming to analyze the number of Chinese residents, at the first two updated years, it is striking to admit that the figure of China made up the highest position, in compared to other 3 countries. Furthermore, there was a gradual drop in the population in this developed country over 3 mentioned years.
Next, based on the statistics provided by American, it can be seen that the population in the USA is marginally fell from merely 7 percent in 1950 to 5 percent in 2002 and predicted in 2050. Among three countries, Japan can be regarded as the nation possesses the lowest number of people over 3 years. Ranked at the bottom of the chart above, the country considered the kingdom of Sakura flowers substantially fell from 1950 to 2020 and this drop is estimated to successively occur until 2050.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...SA and Japan. Overall, during 52-year period of time, from 1950 to 2002, the number of Chine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, second, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97692307692 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68257581771 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6702844331 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805015491592 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313875164732 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697513895265 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054881019866 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871563127547 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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