Process diagram

Essay topics:

Process diagram

The given diagram demonstrates the process of converting from corn to ethanol fuel. Overall, in order to supply ethanol fuel for consuming places, corn is required to experience an array of stages beyond proceeding to manufacture the fuel.
At the first step, the ingredient will be restocked before coming to following stage. After corn’s storing, upon entering the milling step, it is substantially grinding into powder and, then, cooking process, which is demanding in this progress, will occur during 4 hours. In this stage, water is the accompanied element and attributed to the success for the rest stages. Next, after cooking in the sufficient timing, the mixture will be fermented in merely 2 days. After that, when completing the fermentation step, it is thoroughly transformed into two types of products including the by-product existing in solid state and liquid utilized for the next process. For the following step, ethanol will be purified through using the liquid above, which will successively occur over 5 hours. After the purification, the terminal product will be repackaged for storing and, finally, transferring.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39887640449 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83812418158 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7064994787 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121562651823 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586115161948 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11067686723 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111902198052 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055772821852 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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