Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Answer
In the recent days, the outbreak, specifically COVID-19 pandemic, has caused the significant alternative to human life, which triggers the rising number of the deceased on the daily basis. If there is no updated news from mass media, newspaper and television, we will not know the swift spreading speed of this pandemic, along with the methods for preventing the corona virus invading human's body. As a result, I completely disapprove of the ideas denying the importance of news' bonding to people's daily lives.
First of all, the basic feature of the news is national as well as international information transmission. Obviously, successively absorbing the latest global news is regarded as the essential activity for people. Through this process, they can widen their knowledge and know what happens to our living places. Furthermore, day by day, there is an array of occurences that may have the substantial impact on human's living standard, for instance, economy crisis, weather forecast, environmental status and other similar problems.
Importantly, news accumulation is one of the demanding activities to enhance the safety for human's life. In the modern world, the development of technology facilitates people in spreading the necessary information to the globe; besides, the crime, abduction and other criminal issues are accurately notified to the global residents at the fast clip. When there remain various negative factors concerning the society, the police or other people can easily inform those news to the national dwellings for striking notice and avoidance. Recently, the information about the outbreak of corona-virus is sweeping over the global mainstream media. Thanks to those, the international residents may have a chance in knowledge absorption and precaution establishment.
By way of conclusion, there is no denial about the importance and the tight bonding of news to human's lives. It is assumed that if news disappear in one day, personally, I think that the future of people may not be illuminated and immerged in the sinked side of the iceberg.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 463, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...olice or other people can easily inform those news to the national dwellings for striking ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, at least, for instance, i think, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28759894459 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91064066382 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577836411609 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5482997238 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411619632784 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119010519957 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164432995313 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214372542169 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.278444665294 0.056905535591 489% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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