Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that any kind of possible information that can be obtained from reading the news in magazines or newspapers, listening to radio or watching TV news channels, doe not affect on people's lives. This essay disagrees with that suggestion completely because of the benefits which the news bring in people's daily lives. This essay will first look at how the information about the emergency cases can come to people through the news and then will discuss how it is important to reach the news in time.
It is clear that the recent case of epidemic, namely COVID-19, demonstrated the importance of the news. All information about this epidemic regularly appeared in the newspapers, TV programs and in the most important means of communication - Internet. People obtain the news about statistical data about coronavirus, the length of the period of isolation, the mode that will function during lockdown and other important information. For example, I personally reach the information from the news in official site of WHO about the mode of visiting supermarkets, namely the time of visitors according to their age and the information about wearing masks for the protection.
In addition, philosophers from ancient time to the present agreed in the opinion that who has the information may, if desired, has everything. That is to say people who have imagination about how our world functions can succeed in their own lives in comparison with those who completely mistrust the news and ignore any piece of news. The businessmen who invest a billion dollars in buying the information due to build strong strategies for their companies are a prime example of philosophers' saying. It allows them to build secure future and brings financial security, calmness and feeling of well-being.
In conclusion, people who possessed the information that come from different sources such as magazines, journals, newspapers, radio, TV or Internet, have capacity to plan their future according to the current situation in the world and, in particular their lives, and it positively impacts on their well-being.
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...positively impacts on their well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22713864307 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90203365038 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7817458931 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231858980005 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931181626255 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725378625938 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141036133785 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920527395014 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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