Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that if you want to learn new information about other countries you should visit these countries, while others disagree with this and think that everything what people have to do is search the internet or look for the information about countries abroad from TV shows. This essay agrees that traveling broadens people's mind and it is sorely needed to go abroad to develop cultural sensitivity. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that visiting other countries allows travelers better understand and accept the ideas and beliefs of foreign people. Thus, people who travel abroad aware that cultural differences and similarities between races exist without assigning them any value. Such world understanding people can not reach just throughout TV programs or reading posts in the internet. It is therefore agreed that it is necessary to travel abroad to make people more able to understand the world and be aware of cultural values and norms of people abroad. A good example of it is my deeper understanding Polish when I visited their country in comparison with my perception of Polish culture during watching Ukrainian reality shows about travels.
However, many disagree and feel that all the information about other countries, their culture and traditions along with the most popular places people can find on internet pages or through watching TV programs. Despite this, personal contact with foreign people and their mindsets remains priority. For instance, recent research revealed that all information which were not taking personally assimilate in different (lower) level than personal one's.
In conclusion, while the benefits of traveling abroad due to learn the new information about other countries are obvious, some still feel that people can broaden their minds without leaving home. However, while people are interested to discover all information personally they will regularly travel abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59687152614 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5361756667 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409955588906 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137278841581 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822033258348 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248029285191 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743881839679 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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