The bar chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region
The bar chart given bellow illustrated about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. It is measured in percentage. In general, it can be seen that the biggest of population in china.
In information, showed has only approximately 6% of the world's population, but it has nearly 34% of global wealth. A similar situation can be seen in Europe, which has 15% of the population but 30% of global wealth. And the rich Asia-Pasific is 5% of the population but 24% of global wealth.
And the other hand, the least total global wealth is India only 2% same with Africa, and China 8% same with other Asia Pasific. And then, the least number of population is rich Asia-Pasific in the first, the second is Latin America and Caribbean 7%, and the third is Africa 10%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...showed has only approximately 6% of the worlds population, but it has nearly 34% of gl...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... China 8% same with other Asia Pasific. And then, the least number of population is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, then, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76642335766 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79248361304 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7762141653 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.625 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336613178728 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151380805778 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180397579371 0.0843802449381 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245924580209 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153706431102 0.0819641961636 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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