The bar chart below show British emigration from 2004 to 2007
The bar chart illustrates the countries British people moved to live in from 2004 to 2007. At first glance, it is evident that Australia was the most ideal place for British people in all 4 years.
It can be seen from the chart that almost British people selected Australia and Spain to live. In 2004, there were just over 40000 people moving to Australia and the figure for Spain was about 35000 people. In the next year, the number of people choosing Australia slightly decreased, whereas it was not a remarkable change in Spain. In 2006, the number of people moving to Australia reached a peak at over 50000 people. However, there was a gradual drop in Spain in 2006 and 2007.
New Zealand and the USA were places being not interesting for British people. Just under 25000 people emigrated to New Zealand and the USA in 2004. In New Zealand, the number of people continued to rapidly drop to 20000 people in 2007. By contrast, the figure for the USA fell under 19000 people in 2005, then increasing to 25000 people in 2006 and dropping to approximately 20000 people in 2007
The number of people choosing France was low, at around 23000 people in 2004. However, this figure suddenly rose to 33000 people in 2005. Then the figure considerably dropped to about 18000 people in 2007.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t was not a remarkable change in Spain. In 2006, the number of people moving to Au...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66960352423 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28584700879 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466960352423 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8528164994 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5384615385 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16920353694 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858420532082 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111222837041 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134125314004 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919093311578 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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