The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two
companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the
projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end
of next year.
The bar chart depicts approximated sales of jeans in 2 various planets, Mango and Jack & Jones, in Turkey in the next year. The pie chart indicates the percentage of sale by the 2 companies and other productors in next year.
Overall, as it can be seen the quantity of sales will have an increasment trend during the year by 2 companies and both will have half share of total jean sales. Mango will has more than 100 thousands of pairs, whereas the other one will has less than 500,000. In the February both will decreased but Mango will sale almost 50% less than other company. After that both will increase and in July and August Mongo will has a more quantity from sales but this trend will not continued and in the last 4 mounts both increase but Jack & Jones will sale more than other planet. Totally predicts that in the end of next year Mango and Jack & Jones will have 20% and 30% respectively in sales of pair in Turkey and other half will is share of other jean productors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...f share of total jean sales. Mango will has more than 100 thousands of pairs, where...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '100 thousand'.
Suggestion: 100 thousand
...al jean sales. Mango will has more than 100 thousands of pairs, whereas the other one will has l...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ds of pairs, whereas the other one will has less than 500,000. In the February both...
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Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...than 500,000. In the February both will decreased but Mango will sale almost 50% less tha...
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Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...rease and in July and August Mongo will has a more quantity from sales but this tre...
^^^
Line 2, column 472, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...tity from sales but this trend will not continued and in the last 4 mounts both increase ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42541436464 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21583891737 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491712707182 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6723021499 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205308096883 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146438827323 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132069756185 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270863998139 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167775980865 0.0819641961636 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.