The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to four London museums. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates data about the quantity of guests to four museums in London.
Overall, the number of people visiting these four museums experiences a wild fluctuation. In addition, all of these museums welcome most visitors in August and September.
In June, approximately 400000 visitors come to the History Museum. This number then increases sharply to 600000 in August, before witnessing a plunge to around 200000 in December. A similar pattern is observed in the quantity of visitors to the British Museum, which rises from slightly above 400000 in June to around 700000 in August. This figure then dropped marginally to about 600000 in September before registering at around 450000 in
In terms of the National Museum, this destination welcomes around 200000 tourists in June, prior to a substantial increase to 300000 people in August. The figure for the visit to this place then dropped to around 200000 in December. The number of people visiting the Science Museum registered at slightly above 400000 in June, prior to observing a plateau in the next three months. In September, this figure increased marginally to 500000 people, followed by a sharp decrease to 300000 in December.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22797927461 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70413708579 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502590673575 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7888464275 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115510303637 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061137262465 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456065038082 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958709854356 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413832534816 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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