The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening
courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about
the ages of these course participants.
The bar chart compares the numbers of males and females who took four different evening classes
in 2009, and the pie chart shows the age profile of these attendees.
It is clear that significantly more women than men attended evening classes at the education
centre. We can also see that evening courses were much more popular among older adults.
According to the bar chart, drama, painting and language courses all attracted more women than
men to the education centre in 2009. Language classes had the highest number of participants
overall, with 40 female and 20 male students, while painting was a popular choice among both
genders, attracting 30 female and 25 male attendees. The only course with a higher number of
males was sculpture, but this course was taken by a mere 15 people in total.
Looking at the age profile pie chart, we can see that the majority of people attending evening
lessons were over 40 years of age. To be precise, 42% of them were aged 50 or more, and 26%
were aged between 40 and 49. Younger adults were in the minority, with only 11% of students
aged 20 to 29, and only 5% aged under 20.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
...o took four different evening classes in 2009, and the pie chart shows the age p...
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Suggestion: Centre
...nded evening classes at the education centre. We can also see that evening courses w...
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Suggestion: Men
...courses all attracted more women than men to the education centre in 2009. Langua...
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Suggestion: Genders
...nting was a popular choice among both genders, attracting 30 female and 25 male atten...
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Suggestion: Males
...e only course with a higher number of males was sculpture, but this course was take...
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Suggestion: Lessons
... majority of people attending evening lessons were over 40 years of age. To be precis...
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Suggestion: Were
...of them were aged 50 or more, and 26% were aged between 40 and 49. Younger adults ...
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Suggestion: Aged
...e minority, with only 11% of students aged 20 to 29, and only 5% aged under 20.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33278803152 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.534510869 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295557842628 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129140818618 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100226021473 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112062029156 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878079246374 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.