The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

The bar chart gives information about the proportion of various age groups australian people engaging in physical exerces in 2010 .
As can be seen from the bar chart , mostly males who aged 15 to 24 engage in more physical activities that account for 52,8%,however;from 35 to 44 , proportion of physical activity declined significantly 39,5%.However, begining from males after 45 aged,the percentage of physical activity went up slightly to 46,7%.
Regarding to females' proportion , the most active females were 45 to 54 which accounts for 53,3%.Moreover , young women were less active compared to young men aged 15 to 24 . İn the same way , the number of people who are 65 and over was nearly the same with 46,7% and 47,1% respectively .

Overall , females are more active than male except for aged 15 to 24 .

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, regarding, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07518796992 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05415927782 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.9490321564 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286531994122 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143971252083 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899040145725 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171697280993 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787258799179 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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