İt is a fact that several grorups of people prefer not to consume any kinds of meat and fish , as they believe that being vegetarian bring many benefits for their healt and for the world as a whole . I believe that people should consume meat and fish because they contain rich ingredients that are needed by human’s body.
For a number of reasons , some people choose not to eat fish and meat. Firstly , it is believed that several types of meats and fish contain fats which are consideed as unhealthy for the human’s body . people who consume those kinds of meat or fish have a higher risk of diseases such as heart attack or cholesterol. Secondly, as the demand for meat and fish increases , it would have a negative impact on the environment . Therefore , several types of fishes would extinct and it would make the sea ecosystem become imbalance.
On the other hand, many food scientist have found out that there are several types of vitamins and proteins that could only be obtained from meat and fish. For examples, red meat is needed as the source of nutrition for human’s brain. However , the main problem of those who consume a lot of meat and fish cause obesity and diabetic.
To sum up , it is true that some people believe that being vegetarian is healthier than meat consumer , and it would give positive effect to the evironment . However, meats and fish also contain certain types of nutritions that are needed by our body . I believe that if we could balance the consuption of meat , fish and vegetable , it would be better better for human’s body .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75182481752 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5107237304 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496350364964 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9285709837 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218211526702 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963004502751 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608356832692 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152979773404 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483116853336 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.