The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity: 2010
The bar graph makes a comparison between the rate of workout done by Australian men and women at various ages in the year 2010.
Overall, the number of male working out shows a decreasing trend, while that of a female shows a rise in the trend with an increase of age. The workout rate of both the genders fluctuates through the period. Although, the number of young male working out outweighs the female of the same age, however, at older ages the latter outraces the former.
The percentage of male doing physical workouts, during the ages fifteen to twenty-four years, is noticed to be at 52.8%, being 5% higher than that of the female. A drastic fall of about 10% is noticed in the age groups 25 to 34 years, after which it hits its lowest point at 39.5% during the ages 35 to 44 years. However, the figure shows a gradual rise to 43.1% in the ages 45 to 54 years. It continues to go up steadily reaching 41.1% in the ages 55 to 64 years and touching its highest level of 46.7% at the ages 65 years and above.
The number of physically active female is shown to be less than 50% during the teenage and early twenties, as compared to the male gender that accounts for more than half. However, a gradual rise in the trend is seen as the age increases. It rises to 48.9% at first and keeps on rising to more than 50% at the subsequent ages, reaching its highest at the ages of 45 to 54 years. Onwards, it drops to its lowest percentage of 47.1% at the age of sixty-five years and older, leading the male by a minor difference.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33680555556 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30933581905 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.386185049 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.083333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169790847715 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698787384178 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536599579885 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125503472737 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612608039993 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.