The given bar chart provides an overview about the unemployment rate among the male and female graduates who come under the age period of 20 to 24 in the Europe during the two distinct years 2008 and 2009.
Firstly, in first month of the year 2008 , the percentage of unemployed men showed an escalation of 3 % than women. Turning to the month April and June the men had highest proportion as compare to the women while in the October , the rate of jobless men took a quantum jump of 15 % but the percentage of women plunged to the 10%.
Moving further to the 2009, the highest similar percentage can be seen in the unemployed males in first two months from January to April whereas the proportion of females declined to 6% in April from 8% in January. In the July , the unemployment rate of both the genders was approximately constant , it was near 12%.Eventually in the month of October, the men reached the highest peak point of 22% and the women were just under 15%.
Overall, it indicates that the unemployment rate of the men graduates was highest than the women unemployed in the given two periods.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ompare to the women while in the October , the rate of jobless men took a quantum ...
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...in April from 8% in January. In the July , the unemployment rate of both the gende...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63959390863 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61471039072 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527918781726 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6869950411 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.333333333 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196932798051 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109085654908 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857067929501 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133777245641 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080145768106 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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