The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.
The bar chart depicts the information about the percentage of graduate of unemployment by Gender, who's aged 20 to 24 years in one of the European country in the year 2008 and 2009. <br><br>Overall, the number of unemployment increases from 2008 to 2009, except female graduate in April 2009 is remained constant as the previous year 2008. The male graduate experienced an upward trend in unemployment than female. <br><br>In 2008. the men graduated who do not have a job in the month January is accounted for one in ten where as female graduates is around 8%. In the month of April and July, is decreased with a constant for both genders with 7% for male in both months while women are around 6%. The men and female graduates in the month of October the unemployment is rapidly increased to 16% and 11% respectively.<br><br>On the other hand, the number of graduates in 2009 who don't have jobs is some what sink when compared to the end of the year of 2008. In January 2009, men graduates are made up almost 12% in the following month it remained constant as the previous month. While female graduates are 7% in January and it decreased in the subsequent month by around 4%. In July both male and female have 1% vary in unemployment with 11 and 10%. At the end of the period in 2009, unemployment is skyrocketed for male graduates with 23% while also rose to 24% and it is the highest showed unemployment over the two years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90082118589 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2857982301 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187161452891 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807256947818 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133796390263 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187161452891 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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