The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following bar chart provides some information about ten countries which produced and consumed the highest amount of electricity in 2014.
As can be clearly observed from the bar chart, top-ten electricity consumers and producers can be divided into two distinctive classes based on the difference between consumption and production. The first group includes China, Russia, Germany, and Korea Rep which produced approximately as many billion kWh of electricity as their consumption. For example, China as the number one country in either electricity production and consumption, produced 5,398 billion kWh and consumed 5,322 billion kWh electrical energy. The same pattern can be seen in consumption and production of Korea Rep, the last country in the rank, in 2014, by 449.5 billion kWh and 485.1 billion kWh, respectively.
On the other hand, the second group consists of US, Japan, India, Canada, France, and Brazil that are placed in third to the 8th position in a row excluding US as the second position. These countries produced significantly more electricity than they consumed in 2014. Despite the fact that US electricity production was about 4,099 billion kWh in 2014, Brazil produced around 530.7 billion kWh at the same year. The electricity production of India was far more than its consumption with 871 billion kWh versus 698.8 billion kWh.
It is clear from the bar chart that unlike Germany which its electricity consumption took over its production, other nine countries produced more electricity that they consumed in 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34426229508 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84220646636 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8929753311 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.888888889 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210929742738 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10709624871 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662958735035 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165234666217 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478080837614 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.