The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The horizontal bar graph illustrates the production and consumption of electricity, measured in billion kWh, in ten considerable countries of the world in the year 2014.
Overall, the amount of power, produced and consumed by china, was five times higher than other countries, besides the USA.
According to the data provided, electricity produced in china, about 5389, and it was almost 1299 units more than in America, which had 4099. This was followed by russia, japan, and india, which produced 1057,936 and 871 units of energy respectively . The republic of korea was the smallest producer of electricity among other countries, stood at 485 units.
china consumed 5322 billion kwh, compared with the usa which had much less, about 3866. russia used less than one-third of the electricity produced by the us. it was followed by japan, india, and Germany, which had 856, 698, and 582 accordingly. The korea republic consumed the least amount of energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2064516129 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66884618772 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5110079574 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104950054114 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454300253483 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852450891991 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849225909237 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11334147936 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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