The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart shows the production and consumption of electricity in the top ten countries in 2014. Overall, it is obvious that the production and consumption in China and US were larger than in the rest countries, and the consumption was always larger than the production in all sampled countries except Germany.
Starting with China, it produced and consumed the most electricity, at 5398 and 5322 billion kWh respectively. It was followed by United States, at 4099 and 3866 billion kWh, which was nearly four times larger than the figures for Russia, at 1057 and 1038 billion kWh.
Turning now to the rest countries, they all produced and consumed less than 1000 billion kWh, 936.2 and 856.7 billion kWh in Japan, 871 and 698.8 billion kWh in India and 618.9 and 499.9 billion kWh in Canada. The production and consumption of electricity in France(561.2 and 462.9 billion kWh) was similar to those of electricity in Brazil(530.7 and 455.8 billion kWh.). Korea Rep. played the smallest role in producing and consuming electricity, at only 485.1 and 449.5 billion kWh separately. It is interesting to notice that the consumption of electricity in Germany(582.5 billion kWh) was larger than the production of electricity(526.6 billion kWh).
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15346534653 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93089793905 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490099009901 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.4907990627 43.030603864 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.714285714 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201768225867 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159628130981 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.267365213967 0.0843802449381 317% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19031945595 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204816726473 0.0819641961636 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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