The diagram displays the manufacturing of electricity and its expenditure in the top ten countries in 2014.
It is clear that China reached the highest number in utilization as well as manufacturing of electrical energy compared to Korea, which was the lowest country at the same time. In addition, Germany was a noticeable country with the rate of electricity consumption higher than production, unlike the nine other countries with higher rate of electrical production.
The most noticeable country was China with over 5,300 billion kWh in both consumption and production of electricity, also the largest one in 2014. While Korea appeared as the lowest country in electrical manufacturing and utilization with around 460 kWh billion in both axes.
The second smallest in the diagram was Germany, also the only country from the top ten had rate of using electricity larger than the other one with only 526,6 billion kWh of generating and nearly 56 kWh billion higher in consumption of electrical energy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a billion
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Suggestion:
...er in consumption of electrical energy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23456790123 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9631944354 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4868402823 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165975704989 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101120941445 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417680344445 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124312882429 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361301260939 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.