People have two views that whether student should continue their education at university, college or they should get a job after school, and which route is better than the other. Personally, I prefer getting a job right after student finish high school to applying to university or a college.
On the one hand, the option of starting with a job after school is attractive with people for some season. First, student do not need all the knowledge they learnt at university to a successful future. On the contrary, start working a job straight after school might give them more experience than people, who study at university at the same time. In this way, they can become more independent and they be able to afford their own house or start building their own dream. Meanwhile, university and college fees are very expensive and not everybody are unlikely to afford that much of money. Second, university could not give student a successful career. But still, it depends on their hard working, for instance, Bill Gates, Steve Jobs, etc.
On the other hand, continue in an educational environment might give student chances to show their talent and their ability. Moreover, Student are be able to take a position in a big company during study if they could impress that company. For this purpose, studying at university would be a good choice with most of people in the world, and in some countries university diploma is mandatory if people apply to a company.
In conclusion, there are multiple ways to a successful career and people likely to be success if they gain enough experience during their job, even when people study at university or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...nd their ability. Moreover, Student are be able to take a position in a big compan...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... university would be a good choice with most of people in the world, and in some countries uni...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ost of people in the world, and in some countries university diploma is mandatory if peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88256227758 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54707828823 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4155828534 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.538461538 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309176713627 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115572333675 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790410450523 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203070342775 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365779874439 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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