The bar chart below shows the US top ten processed food export markets

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the US' top ten processed food export markets.

The bar chart displays top ten processed food markets for last year and six years ago, where the goods were exported by the United States, being measured in Billion US$.

The overall export of processed food by the United States has increased from what it was 6 years ago. The countries who imported most of their processed food from United States were Canada, Rest of the world and Mexico in that order. The least amount of overall exported processed edibles was towards Hong Kong.

Canada held top position in importing processed foods from United States last year worth 13.2 billion US$, while Hong Kong with 0.3 billion US$ was the lowest importer of processed foods from United States. The country of Mexico, the European Union and Japan held the second, third and fourth places respectively during the last year as well as six years ago. The rest of the world almost doubled their import of processed food from United States by 6.3 to 11 billion US$.

In conclusion, Canada and Rest of world imported generously from United States and Hong Kong sparingly.

Votes
Average: 8 (16 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a Billion'.
Suggestion: A Billion
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...increased from what it was 6 years ago. The countries who imported most of their pr...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of the world and Mexico in that order. The least amount of overall exported proces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, third, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8956043956 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15729847787 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4808102121 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226390595865 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117957645346 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930846226721 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154323911192 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107504934064 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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