The bar chart describes the sales of different goods in pounds in the UK over four seasons in 2015

Essay topics:

The bar chart describes the sales of different goods in pounds in the UK over four seasons in 2015

The supplied bar chart presented the data on turns from different merchandises in pounds in the United Kingdom during four seasons in 2015.

It can be seen that while the number of returns from clothing dominated the chart during the survey period. Meanwhile, while the figure for returns from household and garden decreased relatively, others experienced an opposite trend.

In the spring, the number of turns from clothing ranked first in the chart with 100.000 pounds, followed by that of household with 80.000 pounds. The next position belongs to the figure for electrical equipment standing at the middle of the chart with 60.000 pounds, 20.000 pounds higher than that of a garden with 40.000 pounds. Simultaneously, the data of children’s toys bottomed the chart with roughly 20.000 pounds - 40.000 pounds.

After four seasons, although the clothing’s returns witnessed ups and downs trend, it still remained its highest position in the list with 120.000 pounds. Meanwhile, the figure for electrical equipment’s turns inclined significantly by 20.000 pounds to 80.000 pounds. The same trend was true with the figure for children’s toys with 60.000 pounds, surpassed that of households which experienced a considerable reduction from 80.000 pounds to 50.000 pounds. In addition, a slight decrease was recorded in the data of gardens, standing at the lowest situation in the chart with 20.000 pounds.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42986425339 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7250874807 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497737556561 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7380604946 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113670224033 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06809931442 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933328753798 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120182734253 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128948909933 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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