The bar chart gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK

Essay topics:

The bar chart gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK

The bar chart illustrates the house status of middle-aged people from 25 to 34 years old living in the UK from 2004 to 2014. All the statistics are recorded in percentage.

Overall, there was a downward trend in the percentage of homeowners, which opposite to that of the renters.

According to the bar chart, in 2004, the percent of people who possess their own house reached a peak of nearly 60% which almost triple the rest who still be renters. However, the position gradually reversed since then. Over 8 following years, it experienced a steady decline in the proportion of homeowners which could be interpreted as there was an upward trend for the renters. In 2012, the percentage of homeowners dropped to approximately 43% that nearly equal to the renters (41%).

During the 2013-2014 period, the homeowners were not outnumbered like they used to be while the renters accounted for the majority. The proportion of renters climbed and peaked at about 48% whereas that amount of homeowners kept decreasing and hit the lowest point at about 36%.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, still, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95480225989 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75493110195 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6049926992 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192096450722 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618095924245 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112930635798 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111020887321 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123135411794 0.0819641961636 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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