the bar chart shows the average number of hours per week that men and women spend doing activities around the home

Essay topics:

the bar chart shows the average number of hours per week that men and women spend doing activities around the home

The bar chart compares the average time that men and women spend doing activities. Overall, the most significant facts to merge from the graph are that men spend most of their time watching TV and women cooking. Additionally, there is a dramatic difference between the time that men and women spend surfing the internet.

To begin, watching TV, one of the most popular activities for both men and women, accounts for near 15 and 10 hours of men and women's time per week, respectively. Similarly, surfing the internet is the second activity, which constitutes over 11 hours of men's time; however, women spend just 4 hours, far less than men. On the other hand, gardening includes the lowest timeshare in both men and women; men spend slightly more time rather women and accounts for less than 5 hours per week for both genders.

Women spend most of their time cooking, washing, and cleaning the house, respectively. Cooking represents the majority of women's time with a share of less than a fifth of total time, while this activity accounts for just 10 hours of men's time. Less difference is seen in the reading activity. The average time for both genders is relatively equal.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and women spend surfing the internet. To begin, watching tv, one of the most p...
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...an 5 hours per week for both genders. women spend most of their time cooking, ...
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...ccounts for just 10 hours of mens time. less difference is seen in the reading activ...
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... for both genders is relatively equal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, similarly, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44356824067 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536945812808 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2823365122 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313811066601 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152112337368 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109397779349 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230960463319 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741129989216 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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