The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Information on the frequency of weekly downloads of three software modules is provided as a bar chart. The data reveals discernible patterns in the number of downloads over the course of five weeks.

Overall, the ActiveX module is the most frequent retrieved package, followed by the second popular module Java, and the least frequent downloaded package Net. General trends that can be observed are for one the gradual increase in number of downloads for ActiveX and Java, and second, a mixed pattern for the Net module.

The Net computer package has been obtained just short of 40,000 times in the first week, then downloads steadily decreased until the third week to below 20,000 downloads. In the two consecutive weeks, however, downloads surged to 40,000 and about 50,000, respectively.

Nonetheless, more popular packages were the Java and ActiveX modules, whose figures show initial download rates of about 45,000 and 70,000 in the order stated. In the final week Java’s download rate had gradually increased to a little over 80,000. Except for the fourth week, where ActiveX bumped back from about 110,000 to 100,000 downloads, it reached its maximum download figure in the fifth week with slightly over 120,000 downloads.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, then, third, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32828282828 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52284733943 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3576201533 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215743870436 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105507276162 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060702211235 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149098900944 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885428860199 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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