The bar chart illustrates the free-time activities which children aged 5 to 14 years enjoy in Australia.
Overall, it is evident that both boys and girls are absolutely interested in watching TVs and videos whereas girls are least interested in skateboarding, and boys are find less joy in art and craft.
As shown in the bar chart, 100% boys and girls watch TV and videos, the hobby of all young ones. Around 80% of boys spend their free time by playing computer games, while half of them, about 40%, also do skateboarding. Under 40% of boys enjoy doing art and craft.
As for the girls, approximately 60% girls have hobbies of bikeriding, art and craft and computer games. They are found enjoying these activities in their free time. Only under 30% girls find skateboarding appealing.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8962962963 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68189069928 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4354390525 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.625 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114941276453 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589704253012 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999970678746 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974709894623 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121374236936 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.