The bar chart shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia
This bar chart shows the participation of 5 to 14 years old boys and girls in 5 leisure activities (Stake Boarding, Bike riding, Watching TV, Computer games and Art and Craft) in percentage.
Overall,both boys and girls shows a great interest in watching TV/Videos which is about 90%,whereas boys shows least interest in Art and Craft which is about 30% and girls shows least interest in Skate boarding which is about 25%
Both boys and girls have show some great interest in watching TV/Videos which is about 90%. They also having great interest in electronic games which is about 80% for boys and 60% for girls.Both of them have interest in bike riding as well which is about 70% for boys and 60% for girls.
On the other side both boys and girls have least interest in Skate riding activity which is about 30% for boys and 25% for girls.Girls shows some more interest than boys in Art and Craft which is about 40% and 25% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d boys and girls in 5 leisure activities Stake Boarding, Bike riding, Watching TV...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing TV, Computer games and Art and Craft in percentage. Overall,both boys and ...
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Suggestion: , both
...Art and Craft in percentage. Overall,both boys and girls shows a great interest i...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'shows the least'.
Suggestion: shows the least
... Videos which is about 90%,whereas boys shows least interest in Art and Craft which is abou...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'shows the least'.
Suggestion: shows the least
... and Craft which is about 30% and girls shows least interest in Skate boarding which is abo...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Both
...is about 80% for boys and 60% for girls.Both of them have interest in bike riding as...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the least'.
Suggestion: have the least
... On the other side both boys and girls have least interest in Skate riding activity which...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Girls
...is about 30% for boys and 25% for girls.Girls shows some more interest than boys in A...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'so', 'well', 'whereas']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.385416666667 0.268076937826 144% => OK
Verbs: 0.114583333333 0.116061578633 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.046875 0.0759168565197 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0104166666667 0.0366838410393 28% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0104166666667 0.0131127313244 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151041666667 0.155750635184 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0260416666667 0.0379272487307 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35355726924 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00520833333333 0.0210936926555 25% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0416666666667 0.0948980150116 44% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0416666666667 0.00967000014798 431% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 944.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.9 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58579881657 5.90752243213 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.189349112426 0.337110787985 56% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.153846153846 0.247514529752 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14201183432 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0591715976331 0.112407865282 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35355726924 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426035502959 0.546246751206 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 33.3417426522 49.3433353143 68% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 8.93414634146 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 42.25 23.0094962315 184% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0480110642 42.9750493124 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 236.0 135.714022679 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.25 23.0094962315 184% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => OK
Readability: 57.6346153846 47.7609492067 121% => OK
Elegance: 4.15384615385 2.94281807926 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191622101831 0.418131533498 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.427409835813 0.181151798455 236% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0930753838992 0.0850326197045 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.926065719809 0.706616315825 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115855831285 0.157042692854 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163846332699 0.228904883108 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109244094596 0.108899403657 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.491753284923 0.367819155151 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132486311838 0.0812612215331 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168115075495 0.316326947829 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107196917935 0.0921553760075 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.