Scientists and technology experts are more valued by modern society than musicians and artists
To what extent to do you agree?
In modern era experts related to science and technology are highly graded globally. Whilst, it is thought by some that artists deserve similar importance. I believe scientists are valued more because they are surpassing human expectations in every aspects, therefore, they deserve more importance compared to individuals in other fields.
To begin with, arts define cultural values, local music draw customary picture of a nation. However, in the past couple of decades fields such as acting and music have been corrupted. Industries are biased, for instance its is fairly common to observe that most of the celebrities these days are related to actors, directors, or musician of previous generation. While massive amount of talented artists are roaming in search of a breakthrough into the media. As a result most of the productions these days are not up to the standards and are unable to fulfill expectations of audience. Development of such trend has brought the downfall of arts, as talented artists are ignored and contestants with familial backgrounds are preferred.
On the other hand, science is a field of intellect, so, it is remarkably difficult to trespass a situation while performing a task. In addition to that mega industries and organisations bank on scientific experts to deal with problems and situations. Thus signifying their importance. Furthermore, science defines development and future of a nation. To illustrate, India has more developed film industry compared to Japan. Yet japan, as a country is more developed compared to India due to scientific advancements.
To conclude, although arts hold significant importance in overall development of a nation. Field of science and the experts related hold they key to the future. I agree to the fact that scientist are graded more because they have earned such value by immense hard work.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 296 350
No. of Characters: 1527 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.148 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.159 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.871 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.085 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.038 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rs, or musician of previous generation. While massive amount of talented artists are ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259818731118 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.175226586103 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105740181269 0.0946595960268 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036253776435 0.0501214627716 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0302114803625 0.0437548338989 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123867069486 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0664652567976 0.0403226058552 165% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9656158969 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0513595166163 0.0326793684256 157% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0755287009063 0.0861772015684 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00302114803625 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1871.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.32094594595 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425675675676 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.358108108108 0.28420135186 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219594594595 0.203846283523 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158783783784 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9656158969 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.7843760413 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4444444444 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0043857118 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.944444444 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 52.2552552553 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.8625 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318060341374 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0978800517889 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113043597511 0.0668466124924 169% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.499892677171 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151071383613 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11905710424 0.134430193775 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731566744493 0.0742795772207 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.257312141247 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0513259195483 0.0638462369009 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226640386386 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461168652669 0.058150111329 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
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Rates: 69.3707865169 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9