The bar chart shows the results of a survey in which people in Europe and the USA were asked they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the results of a survey, in which people in Europe and the USA were asked they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business

The line graph demonstrates the outcome of a survey which was conducted in Europe and the USA to identify the most significant factor to become successful in a business.

Overall, It is clear that majority of the people in the USA believed director's personality and Business Management are two major key factors while in the European community it was only business management. However, minority of the people from the European community and the USA considered political situation and external factor have importance too.

According to the graph, around 37% of people from the USA selected how the business is managed and personality of the director as the significant factor to reach the goal, while in Europe, these figures were quite different, nearly 38% and exactly 20%, respectively. Meanwhile, the importance of national economy was being selected by around 21% of European and 19% of American.
Again, the proportion of people who identified external factors were exactly same in both countries, around 8%. Meanwhile, nearly 5% of people from the USA chose political situation as a key factor, while in Europe, the proportion of this figure was almost tripled.

Votes
Average: 9.1 (3 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion of this figure was almost tripled.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26063829787 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84129698163 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0961478639 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.285714286 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285648376389 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134459076332 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543415971737 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177713026053 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462142520823 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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