Essay topics:
The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.
The bar char illustrates the points by the team A, B and C for the seasons between 2002 to 2005.
Overall, team B was the highest score for all the seasons and it is highest among the other 3 teams.
On the one hand, team B score was 82 and it is highest score in 2002 when compared to other team and then it decreased to 60 and 43 for the following year and in the last season it rose to 55.
On the other hand, negligible score of team A is 5 and it half of the team C score in 2002 and next following year team A scored 11 and 35 where as team C score 15 in 2003 and then it declined to 12. At the end of the season team A and team C scored 8 and 5 respectively.
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...he one hand, team B score was 82 and it is highest score in 2002 when compared to other te...
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Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to 60 and 43 for the following year and in the last season it rose to 55. O...
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Line 13, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n it rose to 55. On the other hand, negligible score of team A is 5 and it h...
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Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... following year team A scored 11 and 35 where as team C score 15 in 2003 and then it dec...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 538.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.76223776224 4.92477711251 76% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14360474955 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 106.607317073 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447552447552 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 147.6 283.868780488 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.0 1.45097560976 69% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6395376565 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256156565825 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16525206873 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572994793307 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159994362861 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068883092724 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.82 61.2550243902 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.1 10.3012195122 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.12 11.4140731707 45% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.13 8.06136585366 76% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 40.7170731707 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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