The bar chat illustrates the numbers of children divided by gender who played six different types of sport in a town in England in 2012.
The bar chat illustrates the numbers of children divided by gender who played six different types of sport in a town in England in 2012.
Overall, there were more boys who practiced sport than girls. In particular, the most popular game among boys was football, followed by tennis while girls preferred swimming to any other sport. On the other hand hockey was the least favorite kind of sport with both boys and girls.
Boys outnumbered girls in football, tennis, cycling and hockey. For instance, there were three times as many boys (60) as girls(20) who played football and almost twice as many boys(38) as girls(20) who did cycling and played hockey. With regard to tennis, the difference in the numbers of boys and girls playing tennis was not so considerable.
Swimming and badminton were the most popular sports among girls who exceeded boys by about 20% and 25% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ind of sport with both boys and girls. Boys outnumbered girls in football, tenn...
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...football and almost twice as many boys38 as girls20 who did cycling and played ho...
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...aying tennis was not so considerable. Swimming and badminton were the most pop...
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...were the most popular sports among girls who exceeded boys by about 20% and 25% ...
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... among girls who exceeded boys by about 20% and 25% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for instance, in particular, kind of, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91275167785 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42752707663 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5521981396 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346187504017 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182120128349 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.311464251091 0.0843802449381 369% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316380610407 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.395240603675 0.0819641961636 482% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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