The bar graph below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.

Essay topics:

The bar graph below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.

The bar graph compares 3 types of problems encountered by residents living in 9 different cities in the United Kingdom in 2008. Units are measured in percentage.

Overall, health services were the most common problem in all cities in 2008 except in Glasgow and London, which was education and training, while air pollution was the least issue among the cities.

Problems related to health services comprised the highest percentage in Belfast at nearly 60%, then it is followed by Cardiff with roughly 58% and Birmingham at approximately 55%. The proportion of issue in New Castle and Manchester were almost 52% and just over a half respectively.

Glasgow and London had by far the biggest problem about education and training both at almost 53%, whereas in New Castle and Manchester the figure were both just under 50% and the remaining cities comprised with just over 50%. Air pollution consisted of the lowest percentage in all cities which ranges between about 5% and approximately 15%.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16564417178 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68888083942 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6841942236 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148785071854 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689818749704 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808890499112 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100414930915 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709393758403 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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