The bar graph below shows the scores of team A,B and c in a four different season.

Essay topics:

The bar graph below shows the scores of team A,B and c in a four different season.

The bar chart shows the score of teams A,B and C in four different seasons.

First of all, team A scored 5 points and team C 10 points in 2002. Besides this, in 2003 team A point increased twice which was 11% and scores of team B decreased and reached at 60 points and team C scores also uplifted and touched 15 points.

However, in the year 2004, team A made significant increase and reached at 30 points where as team B scores fell to 43 points and team C also loss their 3 points. However,in 2005,team A score went down to point B and team made 3 important and touched score of 55 points beside this team C fell at 5 points.

Overall, team B scores always remained high whether their score fell sometime. Team A made great improvements in 2004,but team c's points were always lower than A and B.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , B
...The bar chart shows the score of teams A,B and C in four different seasons. Fir...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...icant increase and reached at 30 points where as team B scores fell to 43 points and tea...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...team C also loss their 3 points. However,in 2005,team A score went down to point B ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28947368421 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35771520404 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4225584965 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1428571429 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307073876521 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210166447511 0.103423049105 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141438083819 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274179047485 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159922087358 0.0819641961636 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.46 61.2550243902 151% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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