The bar graph shows the global sales ( in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the international sales ( in billions of dollars) of digital games in four different types namely Mobile phone games, Online games, console games, and handheld games over the 6 years.
Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend in all types of digital games, with Handheld games had the highest figures for sales. While the opposite was true with console games.
Looking at the graph, standing at the highest level were handheld games at roughly 11 billion in 2002, after which it experienced an increase to 16 billion in 2004 and peaked at 17 billion at the end of the period. At the same time, in 2000 console games were only half ( approximately 6 billion) compared to handheld games, it followed by dropped to 4 billion in 2004 and hit the lowest point at 3 billion in 2006.
Appearing in 2001, the online game sold about 1 billion, then was upgraded to 4 billion in 2004 and ended at more than 6 billion in 2006. Meanwhile, starting at 2 billion in 2002 mobile phones rose to 5 billion after two years and reached 7 billion in 2006.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hart illustrates the international sales in billions of dollars of digital games ...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ames had the highest figures for sales. While the opposite was true with console game...
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Line 6, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me, in 2000 console games were only half approximately 6 billion compared to hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41487002181 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4789903238 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28715608538 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13752349523 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785915302424 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175145295046 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717564360305 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.