The below graph illustrates the various roadblocks that entrepreneurs face while opening their own company.
The plotted graph provides information regarding the beginners that they experienced twelve types of challenges when they start a new business. Every challenge further divided percentage-wise in three different categories, which were a major barrier, minor barrier and not a barrier.
Looking at the chart, IT roadblocks were a major barrier in all about 47% for new startups. In comparison, only 13% of entrepreneurs found major difficulties in the privacy laws of their new firm. Moreover, it was also predominantly highest just near the half in the minor barrier category which was followed by a lack of knowledge with 47%.
The two categories, the not enough data and too much data was not a barrier for more than 44% businessman. Besides, the almost similar trend was observed for the lack of budget and lack of staff in three groups. Similarly, the same trend also confronted for inability to translate data into action and organizational silos with minor fluctuation for all types of barriers.
Overall, the percentage for the major barrier was significantly higher in almost all as compared to not a barrier. However, the figure for the minor barrier was quite nearer for all except few categories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'predominantly the highest'.
Suggestion: predominantly the highest
...f their new firm. Moreover, it was also predominantly highest just near the half in the minor barrier...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...categories, the not enough data and too much data was not a barrier for more than 44...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30964467005 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95098980831 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578680203046 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6820607211 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.6 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0325093802518 0.215688989381 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169811114861 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293643837075 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0221014125774 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266413763561 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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