Book 7 Test 1 Writing Task 1
The given table illustrates the data of expenditure on five various items consumed in five different countries in the year of 2002.
Overall, it can be noticed that, all countries has spent highest amount on foods, drinks and tobacco, while lowest money paid for leisure and education.
Turning back to details, Turkey spent highest on foods, drink and cigarette which is 32%.However,Sweden paid lowest in this criteria which is 15.77% .Italy and Spain spent money 16.36% and 18.80% respectively. 28.91% was paid by Sweden on the same items in 2002.
For leisure and education, Turkey paid 4.35% which was the highest percentage among other four countries. Sweden paid second highest amount. Italy and Ireland’s expenditure was 3.20 %and 2.21%.In this sector Spain (1.98%) has spent the lowest money.
All countries spent less 10% on clothes and footwears. Italians has showed highest desires on these criteria of 9% expenditure than other. Approximately, Turkey showed near demand of 6.63% on clothes and footwear. Ireland and Spain showed almost same amount of 6.43% and 6.51% respectively. Meanwhile, Sweden people had lowest desire to clothing (5.40%).
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the highest'.
Suggestion: spent the highest
... can be noticed that, all countries has spent highest amount on foods, drinks and tobacco, wh...
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Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'while the lowest'.
Suggestion: while the lowest
...st amount on foods, drinks and tobacco, while lowest money paid for leisure and education. ...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the highest'.
Suggestion: spent the highest
...ation. Turning back to details, Turkey spent highest on foods, drink and cigarette which is ...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...foods, drink and cigarette which is 32%.However,Sweden paid lowest in this criteria whi...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sweden
...drink and cigarette which is 32%.However,Sweden paid lowest in this criteria which is 1...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ch is 32%.However,Sweden paid lowest in this criteria which is 15.77% .Italy and Spa...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... lowest in this criteria which is 15.77% .Italy and Spain spent money 16.36% and 1...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Italy
...owest in this criteria which is 15.77% .Italy and Spain spent money 16.36% and 18.80%...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...eland’s expenditure was 3.20 %and 2.21%.In this sector Spain 1.98% has spent the l...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'showed the highest'.
Suggestion: showed the highest
... on clothes and footwears. Italians has showed highest desires on these criteria of 9% expendi...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
... respectively. Meanwhile, Sweden people had lowest desire to clothing 5.40%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37912087912 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68683565913 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5770573795 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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